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Use Words, Not Punctuation, To Tell Your Story

September 25, 2011 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Punctuation can overwhelm a sentence or paragraph. Poor punctuation can be a distraction, pulling readers out of the fiction and out of the mood to read your work. Let words tell the story. Use punctuation for other purposes.

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Character Voices Shouldn’t Sound Like Yours

September 15, 2011 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Characters should use words specific to their backgrounds and histories, and not sound like the author who created them. Explore the importance of word choice for characters.

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Head-Hopping Gives Readers Whiplash

September 10, 2011 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Head-hopping—changing viewpoint characters or the point of view without warning or in mid-paragraph—can pull readers right out of your fictional world. Discover why head-hopping is a no-no.

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You Got My Attention, But Where’s the Action?

September 5, 2011 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Stories need action events. Something needs to happen, not only to keep characters moving forward, but to keep readers interested.

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