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(Most) Characters Can’t Read Minds

September 25, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Be aware of the trap of making your viewpoint character a mind reader. Characters can’t always guess what others are thinking and the motivations for their behavior.

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Restrictive or Not—When Do Clauses Need Commas?

September 17, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Is it a comma before which or before who or before that? Are there really rules and do I have to follow them in my fiction? Tips for comma use with essential and non-essential phrases and clauses.

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Clear the Dread from the Dreaded Synopsis

July 15, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Every novel writer should create at least one summary of each manuscript in the form of a synopsis. Tips for formatting your synopsis and ideas for how to approach creating one.

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That’s Not a Real Word

July 2, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

You’re a fiction writer? Then by all means feel free to make up words for your story world.

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Claustrophobia—Don’t Imprison Readers in a Character’s Head

June 16, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

There is more to story than a character’s thoughts. Be sure to step outside a character’s head so readers can experience a full story that includes action, dialogue, emotion, setting, and thought.

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Step Outside Your Story World

May 2, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Writers often become so lost in their stories that they can’t look at them dispassionately. Remember to step back and away from your fiction so you can get a true picture of a story.

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Include Surprises in Your Stories

April 16, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Are your characters and plot so predictable that even you are bored? Add surprises to make stories fresh and characters engaging.

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How Long Should My Story Be

April 7, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Writers can’t write novels of any length, not if they want to be published traditionally. Word count is important, especially for the first-time novelist.

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Variety in Character Voices

March 15, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Speech and thought patterns should differ from character to character. Learn tips for differentiating character voices.

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Inner Dialogue—Writing Character Thoughts

February 28, 2012 by Fiction Editor Beth Hill

Tips for writing character thought and inner dialogue. There are options for punctuation and method.

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